Write about the following topic.
With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people.
Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Health care industry is booming with success due to the increase in research and inventions in the field of medical science. Modern society needs to find out ways to deal with increasing number of elderly people and ways to manage them. This essay will describe various solutions that can be used to manage growing number of elderly people.
Some people after a certain age are unable to carry out physical activities but there are many modern services that can make it easy for them. For example, there are cab services available on the click of a phone which reduces dependency of elderly people to go anywhere in the city. Recently my grand parents wanted to visit one of the relatives and I was in office, I booked a cab that came at the door step and took them to the destination. Improvement in transport facilities have made them self reliant and has given young people more time to focus on important duties.
There is an considerable improvement in science, thus enabling elderly people to do things on their own. Electric wheel chair is a good example where the user can operate the wheel chair on his own without human intervention. My maternal grandmother uses a wheel chair as she cannot walk. Previously it was mandatory for someone in the house to be there to move here from one place to another. Now as we got an electric automatic wheel chair she no longer needs anyone's support and she can use a remote and go around in the house. Similarly there are many scientific inventions that make it easier of elderly people to live with minimum dependency.
I believe as research and development continuous to grow it would make elderly people more independent thus making it easy to manage. The above points like easily available services and innovative products will make it easy for us to manage the increasing number of elderly people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77329192547 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54192309443 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8935701793 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.466666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273203335829 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860250664391 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060026038575 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164701195929 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810250757154 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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