Write about the following topic:
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
One of the side effects of capitalism and consumerism is certainly increase in non degradable waste also known as rubbish. Though ecocnomic development has improved life of many, it has adversely impacted ecology and planet earth as a whole. Definately waste is one of the global issue which need to addresed by government all across the globes and by each living earth resident.
Now a days, big producers ultimate and foremost goal is to meet shareholders expectation and show growth in revenue as well as profit at any cost. They are not judged by how enviornment friendly their prcedures are or whether the produces are bio degradable. In order to maintain or increase profitibility, corporate generally compromise factors which will not have immediate effect but will show negative results in long run. As an example, plastic provides cheaper option for pipe manufactors and their top line & bottom lines improves. As a result, they dont switch to better enviornmental friendly resources.
Consumer on the other hand lacks awareness. If consumer understands in depth, enviornmental impact of process used to produce products, parts used to manufacture products and decides not to buy those which produces rubbish, then maufacturers will automatically start taking action to please cnsumers.
Since its a high time now, as huge debris of rubbish adversely impacting enviornment, resulting into severe problem like climate chnage, government should take prompt action to resolve this issue. Government can effectively uses electronic, print media and digital social platforms to increase awarness about impact of rubbish on the planet. In addition, government can ensure that this topic is also covered in education curriculum for children. Government can incentivetize industries for their effective waste managment and put a surcharges on the products which may require greater effort in long run to manage debris.
Finally, i believe there is no reason man can solve problem created by himself. Despite being dependent on government, as a gloabl citizen, its our responsibility to make this planet earth a beautiful place to live for generations to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...capitalism and consumerism is certainly increase in non degradable waste also known as r...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...bes and by each living earth resident. Now a days, big producers ultimate and foremost go...
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Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...and by each living earth resident. Now a days, big producers ultimate and foremost go...
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Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ottom lines improves. As a result, they dont switch to better enviornmental friendly...
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Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...king action to please cnsumers. Since its a high time now, as huge debris of rubb...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
... this issue. Government can effectively uses electronic, print media and digital soc...
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Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a surcharge' or simply 'surcharges'?
Suggestion: a surcharge; surcharges
...their effective waste managment and put a surcharges on the products which may require great...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in long run to manage debris. Finally, i believe there is no reason man can solv...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ent on government, as a gloabl citizen, its our responsibility to make this planet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, then, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40828402367 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95111182559 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671597633136 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8500485832 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151921976957 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444631120439 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374669535135 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749338166606 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395901592104 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.