You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. Smith,
This letter is to inform you that, due to recent chnage in circumstances, i will not be able to continue to attend part-time evening course from coming Monday.
Recently, there is change in my employment status and i had to leave my previous job and to take a new one. My new job demands night shift every alternate week. Even for weeks where i will be doing day job i wont be able to attend course in evening as it is a new and demanding job, i may need to put extra hours to meet the expectation of the employer.
However, this situation will not be permanent and after detailed discussion with employer, i can assure that after six months i will not be required to do extra hours or shift work Hence, after a break of six months, i will continue the course again from next term.
I request you to accept my application to provide a break of a term to my course and extend the deadline to finish the course.
Your's faithfully,
Shailabh Jha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...e is change in my employment status and i had to leave my previous job and to tak...
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... new one. My new job demands night shift every alternate week. Even for weeks whe...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ry alternate week. Even for weeks where i will be doing day job i wont be able to...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ening as it is a new and demanding job, i may need to put extra hours to meet the...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fter detailed discussion with employer, i can assure that after six months i will...
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...yer, i can assure that after six months i will not be required to do extra hours ...
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...ork Hence, after a break of six months, i will continue the course again from nex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48529005685 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9661578787 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206206022992 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903004192841 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811445312514 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134941634797 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953314565157 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.