Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The number of people undergoing an abortion in recent times has increased many folds and It has opened a can of worms. There are few fringe groups who are against legalizing abortion and their theory is based on the misunderstood religious beliefs. However, In my opinion, there are instances where legalizing it can prove beneficial for many women and their families in the long run, and at the same time, save the lives of many people.
In this modern era of advanced scientific studies, It is highly unfortunate to have such a low level of awareness on abortion. It is often observed that this misguided notion stems from the fact that religion is against the killing of an unborn fetus. No religion or its preachers would have advocated such a sinful belief to his followers. This is a pure misconception amongst the people who barely understood the religion. The blind faith in such practices is actually doing more harm than good to society.
The legislation on abortion can regularize the practices on various factors. The rules such as mandatory consent from parents for unmarried abortions, permission to abort only in cases where there are more than two children, and, last but not the least, medical conditions that need abortion in order to save the carrying women or unborn baby. For instance, pregnant women who are diagnosed as medically incapable of delivering the child or, fetus having adverse medical conditions can be certified by a registered doctor and abortion can be carried out. This can aid in reducing the malpractices present in illegal abortions.
To summarize, Legalizing abortion can prove unequivocally beneficial for the healthy future generation and community despite the fact that arriving at a consensus on such a law by legislators and think-tanks might be hard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8010594582 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2813861138 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144508703378 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509962448814 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443062929037 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881191866968 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417893776562 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.