It has long been a subject of discussion whether internet is most useful discovery or not. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that deserve attention, and I will explain by using pertinent arguments and examples.
To commence with, internet plays a crucial role in online learning. Moreover, beneficial for doing work from home by using network technology on computers. According to a recent survey done by Stanford University 65% of mentors complete their tertiary education by attending colleges and schools online rather than in person while 35% students achieve degrees in person. Although business for instance, healthcare, police department serve the nation in person, need to update record of their patients and criminal using internet respectively.
Moving further, for start business from home network connection is required which connect us with the community Facebook, Twitter for example. However, inadequate screen Time direct affects health, especially eyes. As a result, cause stress, disturb mental health. An academic study done by Canadian government that no doubt, people misuse internet via cybercrime, disturb their physical health, if utilize in positive way internet provide great opportunity for overall development of an individual.
In conclusion, from what we have discussed above I firmly believe that teaching and learning, job opportunities are easy to access because of internet invention.
- Writing task 2 an essay Some people say that the Internet is the most important invention To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your reasons and examples 56
- More and more people are using the internet to do their tasks rather than doing in person e g banking shopping hotel booking etc Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 92
- Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries Why is this What effects does this have on society 56
- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem 67
- Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries Why is this What effects does this have on society 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7037037037 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78659095729 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0581727502 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098056311222 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344992927274 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342403639207 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538908744087 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116567221726 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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