In this modern era, technologies have developed tremendously and new appliances got invented. In old days people used to do all household activities manually, whereas now, majority of people depends on machines. Let us look more in detail and analyse the advantages and disadvantages of doing household activities manually and by machine.
On one hand, with the introduction of new appliances like fridge, mixer, washing machine and so on, the workload has been reduced to a great extent.machines have helped a lot in time saving.For example, an automatic washing machine could wash clothes within hours whereas earlier people used to wash clothes on stones which take more than 1 or 2 hours. As the work pressure reduces, people will have more mental strength and more energy.
On the other hand, aged people do household activities themselves as they are more concerned about their health. These newpy developed machines are even harmful for us. For example, the radiation emitted from a micro wave oven can cause cancer like diseases. Furthermore, the energy consumed by this appliance are far high and are expensive. Eventhough it is convenient to save time, it adds on laziness and make us more fatty by sitting idle.
To sum up, in my opinion, it is better to do things manually rather than depending on machines as it causes health issues as well it consumes more power and energy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, so, well, whereas, for example, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07792207792 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75712379151 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645021645022 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6396526847 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972021998005 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333892449211 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266885226644 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575151058592 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247171243942 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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