Criminal activities are tremendously increasing day by day in our society. In most of the countries, culprits are sent to prison for long years on the basis of their crime, whereas, in some countries the offence are punished the same instance without letting them to stay in jail.There is a debate going on whether to keep prisoners in Jail or they should do unpaid work to help people in the community. We will have a brief discussion on both the concepts and reach to a final conclusion at the end.
On one hand, criminals are sent to jail for one or another reason. They might be arrested for reasons like theft or a murder. So we cannot be sure whether the offensive is dangerous to approach or not. So it is better to keep the culprit on a jail for our safety. We cannot be sure when they would be hyperactive and if something happens, it would be very difficult to control them.Moreover offensive people doesnot deserve any kind of concession as they broke the rules. For example, most of the jails in India is providing chappathis and chicken curry for the criminals in Jail. This would bring a negative impact on people as well as criminals. People would believe that even if they are put in a jail for any reason, they would be served with chicken curry.
On the other hand, some of the people say that the criminals should do some unpaid work to help people in the community. As long as the Government spends money for the expense of the jail maintenance, food and all other facilities, the involvement of prisoners would be a benefit for the country. Most of the criminals might not be arrested for an intentional crime. Some might have done those because of their situation. For example, a father might kill the person who raped her daughter. Here the father is not a born criminal. It was the situation which forced him to do the same.Likewise,so many people would be there in Jail. So it is better to give a moral and mental support for them. Even nowadays,the prisoners are allocated with some duties and they get paid for the same. So this money would be an earning for them to spend after they get released from the jail. Eventhough if they are involved in activities from which they do not get any wages, still they can refresh their mind.
As a sum up, i reached to a conclusion that the criminals should be engaged in any of the social activities as it can helps them to engage with people and learn more about the social values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, for example, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53483146067 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55072117504 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458426966292 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9251097749 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7391304348 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280552008558 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845711550548 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975631761921 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184513079271 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539525126047 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.