You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
say what the participants liked about the hotel
explain why they were unhappy about the food
suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear sir or madam, recently my company has organized an all-day meeting in your hotel. This letter, I would examine my experiences which took place in a our local hotel. Some of us said that they liked the hotel but unhappy, but the other hand they said that food was served for lunch is bad. My participants said that a local hotel has a good scenery and designed was adorable, it is due to local hotel provide local culture in every room. That was first our experienced and we thought we took place again in this hotel.
But, when we ordered a menu, we waited for so long and when we get foods, they give another food which we did not order it. It is a mistake, we starving to get right food and we received no apologies, but we exited taste of food is delicious.
I would give my suggestion for improving your food serve and you can consider it. Firstly, you must manage time for every employee, because it is important to get efficient time and costumers feel satisfied when they take a sit and directly waiters come to us. Secondly, give a manner to make costumer enjoy and when they do a wrong serve, they must apologize. Overall serve of your hotel is the best .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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...costumers feel satisfied when they take a sit and directly waiters come to us. Second...
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Suggestion: .
... Overall serve of your hotel is the best .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38990825688 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30610334399 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7994875073 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399868304812 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157365217763 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901185733866 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247883788798 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168259834074 0.056905535591 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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