You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains.
You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up.
Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fit+ness level.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
I am Navdeep puri, dweller of Huston Road New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to express my interest to take part in your mountaineering trip which is scheduled in the first week of following month. Since my childhood ,I have a dire wish for a walking tour in the mountains, however my prevailing health conditions do not let me to do so.
It would be highly appreciable if you apprise me with whole itinerary and cost to be paid for this. Whether the food and all other necessary items would be endowed by you or I have to arrange it myself ? Kindly, acquaint me with mode of payment and whether there is any kind of prerequisite advance.
Even though I have gained a lot of weight and developed an ache in ankle, i have a strong will power to go with this trip. It would be grateful if you inform me about the level of physical fitness which I would require . I hope i would restore my stamina and physical fitness so that I would be the part of this mountaineering trip.
I anticipating a prompt reply from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Navdeep Puri.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-03-30 | purinavdeep@gmail.com | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49743589744 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62882418323 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635897435897 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2216762184 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176133487792 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665779409007 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505366759105 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903596760881 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404727339772 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.