You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There has been a colossal upsurge in discussing that a range of government opine that developing economic progress are the determining factor and the prime goal of a nation while the others assume that there still occurs a wide range of progresses are vital for a country to become powerful. Both sides of this debate will be analysed in this essay before my reasonable conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, it is hardly unaccepted that economy plays a pivotal role in the process of ameliorating prosperity of any country. Firstly, the dramatical increase in the statistic of economy can prove for the higher living standard and earned income of the inhabitants in this nation. Secondly, forcing the developing economic progress can help this nation become more powerful and prosperous, which is the elements to turn this country into the most worth place to live. Gaining the substantial rewards in economic progress can help the government have more funds to invest it the facilities and infrastructure to improve the living standard for the dwellers. Perhaps the best example of this are some nations like Singapore, Japan,...It is obvious to see that thanks to the intensive increase in GDP or another economic factors can make these nations increase the opportunities to cooperate with the powerful nations such as America,UK,.. and even generate the opportunities to deter the economic crisis phenomenon.
On the other hand, it is undoubtedly that economic progress is not the only methods to make the country become worth to live. It can be stated that another factors such as developing natural environment, positive energy .. can contribute a huge effect to the nation. A range of developed nations just only concentrate on the developing of economy and neglect to the quality of this environment. There are many recorded evident that the government and authority system nowadays damage more and more this environmental resource for the economic profit. This not only can lead some negative repercussion to the environment such as green house effect, bushfires,. but also attack the health of the residents. Moreover, the high suicide rate of developed nations are much more higher than the others, which can prove that the government need to notice about the health and living attitude of this inhabitants. This is the reason why forcing economic progress is not always a best effective method in any era.
To recapitulate, two sides associate with everything: one affirmative and one negative. It is true that the government's concern to ameliorate the economic progress is necessary but not always. I personally believe that the government can combine the economic progress and others mentioned factors to improve the nation' standard effectively and efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , .
...s are some nations like Singapore, Japan,...It is obvious to see that thanks to th...
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...e some nations like Singapore, Japan,...It is obvious to see that thanks to the in...
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...ng natural environment, positive energy .. can contribute a huge effect to the nat...
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...nt such as green house effect, bushfires,. but also attack the health of the resid...
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Suggestion: But
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Suggestion: higher
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...about the health and living attitude of this inhabitants. This is the reason why for...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... economic progress is necessary but not always. I personally believe that the governme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2340.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2466367713 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88079772645 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47533632287 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 776.7 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9922110718 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193941195065 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631163277387 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053309319491 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137173474705 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215914271836 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.