Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advertisment is a key medium for any organization/manufacturer/service provider to engage with it's consumer. Advertimsements can be of different types such as television commercial, digital scial media Ad or newspaer/banner etc.
Now a days organizations allocate signifiacnt budget for marketing campaigns for their products. It is evident from research that an investment in advertisment do result in incremental revenue and hence improved profits/cash flows.
Benifits of the advertisement are debateable, a person might get introduced to a useful product that can have a positive impact on wellbeing; e.g. advertisement of a Vitamin D tablet that can reduce joint pains. On the other hand we often see a "cool good looking model" puffing cigarette which is indirectly encouraging underage audiance to smoke.
In my opinion the the pros of advertismeent outweight the cons. We have enetered in a world that is continously evolving and the consumer is always looking for a perfect product. Everyone is thriving to have a better lifestyle. It would be diffcult for organizations to share development of any new product with the target consumer if there is no channel to enage with it's consumer. We would not have seen the technological revolution, if this important medium of interaction was missing. Who would have known about Microsoft if they haven't advertised about Windows. These technologically advanced products would have been considered just for geeks to do office work. It was the advertisment who indicated that how these products can be used by an average Jo to bring ease in his life. Similarly car, mobiles and all the devices now in the market got accepted via advertismenet.
It is very difficult to catgeorize what is a necessity and what is not. Purchasing a latest laptop might be a must have product for a person working in IT field, while it might not be mildly attractive for a 50 year old plumber. Therefore; in my opinion, now the audience knows about their needs/wants and are continously seeking new products that can make life more comfortable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t pains. On the other hand we often see a 'cool good looking model' puf...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...age audiance to smoke. In my opinion the the pros of advertismeent outweight the con...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ould have known about Microsoft if they havent advertised about Windows. These technol...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...n average Jo to bring ease in his life. Similarly car, mobiles and all the devices now in...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., hence, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25373134328 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53945271919 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605970149254 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5994386833 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195754248854 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550976536696 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425698612494 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100892704116 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279828364716 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.