Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
We can find two types of people in society. some of them are so active and ambitious, they want to become successful in every step of life and try to improve and grow on every hard situation. However, others are afraid of situation, that they accept the situation, even it is bad. Both view will be discuss in the essay, but I support the view of people who try to improve the bad situation.
In the begin, problems are part of the part of the life. It comes and go, but we need to try to improve the situation and tackle with it. People must try to grow in every situation, but some accept the situation as it is and remain in the same place. For example, if employee is unsatisfied with reward or salary as per the work, he/she must try another company as per the qualification. We must seek for the better job though it takes some time, to improve the situation of life. But some people are afraid of that, they accept the unsatisfied situation easily. This can create problems in their family too. Every people need enough money to survive the life and make it better. Due the decision of not moving to another job, family has to face difficulties.
This situation is created by the lack of employment. Some country, like Nepal, employment opportunity is less and people are afraid of losing their job. If they left recent job to find another, they cannot find next job as per their except and situation can be worst. Some people think on this way and accept the unsatisfied job.
On other hand, some people think that their work and qualification must be appreciated and rewarded. They cannot accept any types of unsatisfaction and less salary according to their position and qualification. They always try for the higher position and seek for the better job. Their confident level, qualification and ambitious nature help them to enjoy the better life.
Moreover, people need to build of confident on them also that they can handle any higher position work and to tackle with this situation. They need to make them more qualified and do not be afraid to handle any work. First they need to apply on various company and after getting new job, they must regisn in current company. This can help them not to lose current job before getting new one.
In conclusion, due to the lake of confident, technical knowledge and different type of unemployment problem of country, people accept the unsatisfaction on job. But people should try to improve any types of bad situation by little cleverness and enjoy the better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...an find two types of people in society. some of them are so active and ambitious, th...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[1]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'situations'.
Suggestion: situations
...ituation. However, others are afraid of situation, that they accept the situation, even i...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o try to improve the bad situation. In the begin, problems are part of the part of the l...
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Line 2, column 609, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...an create problems in their family too. Every people need enough money to survive the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67040358744 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51288881314 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40134529148 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1346771251 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1481481481 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5185185185 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251959154661 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824610906822 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666447532416 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149610765846 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658580931207 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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