Young couples nowadays prefer to have fever children than previous generations. Most of them prefer to accomplish other goals in their life first. Is it a positive or negative development?
In the recent era, the current generation believes in focusing on their goals and having a small family, whereas the prior generation’s views were totally contradictory. In my opinion, there are an abundance of advantages rather than disadvantages which are explained in the paragraphs below.
Firstly, having a lower number of kids in a family provides the parents with the opportunity to focus more on the child’s development and nourishment. For instance, if there are just 1 or two children in a family the parents are not much worried about the finances and are able to meet all the basic requirements like nutritious food, clean water, proper education, and so on. Hence, not having many kids works as a stepping stone for the healthy flourishment of the child. Secondly, the fewer the children, the less will be the expenses which later increase the chance of spending that income on leisure activities. It has been noticed that the time spent with the family during adventurous activities is more memorable than that of the period passed on regular days. Therefore, the children will be able to gather good memories and spend enough time with their parents.
Mentioning the negative development, more children will prove beneficial to share the parental responsibilities. For illustration, if there are more than two children the elder child is always seen taking the responsibilities of their parents and becoming more mature compared to the children from a family that has one or two children.
To sum up, in this decade having a nuclear family instead of a joint family serves more benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10606060606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92875299796 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1337186737 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140463729312 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052675455607 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339910516983 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843880347157 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369560345071 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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