Youths nowadays are deemed to have more role and impact in the society compared to that of in the previous era. In this essay, I will try to explore what factors drove this change in the first pace and what kind of impacts it gives to inter generations' relationship.
Firstly, young generation in this era put more emphasis on higher education. Thus, generally they are more educated and have more concern towards various aspects in society. This has become one major change compared to young generation in the previous decades, where tertiary education was still exclusive to those who came from privileged family. Secondly, I think the way this world gets more opened and connected because of internet and social media also led the youths to be more active in society. Not only do people now have platforms to share ideas, but we also can make use of these to meet people with same aspirations. This would then make it easier for people, youths included, to take more concrete action executing their ideas.
The way youths become more involved in society, inevitably would give some changes in the way they interact with older people. If in the past people were respected because of their age, nowadays this view has shifted in which people are valued from their competence and idea, not from their age per se. Moreover, young people has ceased to see older generations as authoritative figures whom they should follow and be afraid of, but rather as a source of learning and collaboration. For instance, Ministry of Education in Indonesia has hired several youths under 30 who are passionate and have fresh insight in education sector. The new staff and the 'older generations' in the Ministry are willing to collaborate together to solve problems faced related to curriculum or schools. The both parties respect and value each other regardless of their age differences.
In conclusion, I am convinced that a more open education access and availability to express opinions through internet are two important factors shaping youth bigger contribution in society. Their taking more concrete role hence have affected the way they respect and are respected by older generations.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237244897959 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.176020408163 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102040816327 0.0946595960268 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0586734693878 0.0501214627716 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408163265306 0.0437548338989 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114795918367 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0510204081633 0.0403226058552 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60558970092 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382653061224 0.0326793684256 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0739795918367 0.0861772015684 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127551020408 0.021408717616 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178571428571 0.011925033212 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2182.0 1933.35771543 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 316.048096192 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04432132964 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365650969529 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268698060942 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191135734072 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1108033241 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60558970092 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.037074148 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573407202216 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 65.2544010038 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5625 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0830213413 49.517814964 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.375 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.814263465372 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.4323060942 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.46296296296 1.69124875643 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425180685371 0.332605444948 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.085361857387 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0444887595373 0.0668466124924 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.513141137408 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128721845147 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1663510939 0.134430193775 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622502477433 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.401615346919 0.324371583561 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0494715555688 0.0638462369009 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296204019589 0.228012699653 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860617669073 0.058150111329 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.