Youngsters nowadays prefer to live on their own and leave their families. Is this a positive or a negative development?
It is argued that young people like to spend their lives in solitary without their families. I think this is a negative development because they cannot take care of their family members by living alone, and this can have psychological problems for them.
The young ones may not be able to take care of their families if they leave them. This is because after leaving them they may not feel the need to support their parents. Their parents brought them up to their best, and it would be ungrateful if they forget them. If they stay with their families, they will feel profound happiness. A recent report by the Jhang Society has shown that 60% of teenagers who leave their families and live alone forget about their parents and siblings and do not bother to think about them.
Living in solitary often has adverse effects on the personalities of young people. Being alone, they cannot share their thoughts as freely with other people as they would do with their parents or siblings if they lived with them. As a result, they would feel the loneliness that would start changing their minds and lead them to think about negative things, like becoming addicted to drugs to feel relaxed. For instance, a report by the Times showed that over 50% of criminals left their families when they were adolescents.
In conclusion, in my opinion, leaving families by youngsters and living separately is a negative development. This is because they would not be able to fulfill their moral obligation of taking care of their parents, and it can have drastic effects on their personalities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85608856089 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42666433044 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483394833948 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2601699786 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34333343006 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156158022187 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649582918334 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271579032949 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762220392665 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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