Today the tourism industry has significantly thrived. One of the most effective criteria for this improvement is taking advantage of the tour guides. These days most of the group travels are handled by a tour leader. I agree with the statement because of some strong reasons which make our trip more entertained.
First, it’s so important to be familiar with the places which attract most of the tourists. If we don’t have enough information about this type of areas, not only we wouldn’t enjoy from our trip, but also we may waste our budget and time. As an example, last year my family and I had gone to the north of our country to spend our weekend. We tried to ask about the sightseen places of that city from natives. Although the natives wanted to help us to find some places, when we came back to our town and researched about the city which we had gone, we realized that we didn’t see some attractive places which were famous. Besides that, we sometimes lost and caused to lose our temper for a couple of times.
Second, I think finding new friends that enjoy the trip like us, can help us to entertain ourselves more. Traveling in a group help us to get an opportunity to get familiar with some people and to improve our social abilities by speaking about different topics. For example, my brother made a relationship to a girl in a group traveling that caused to find not only his favorite girl for his life, but also he got an exciting opportunity to work in his city.
To sum up, I think the experience of a group traveling which led by a tour guide can help us a lot to enjoy more from our trip and not to waste our money. What’s more, we can elevate the level of our social life and find some opportunity in our lives.
- 74.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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- 74.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...natives. Although the natives wanted to help us to find some places, when we came back to our t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, speaking about, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4984423676 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51593460215 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526479750779 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6075816436 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805887330668 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360471889042 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480465727777 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716511655441 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538959181284 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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