All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Undoubtedly, whether history course should be a compulsory or not is one of the most controversial topics in society, especially in my country. Students, professors and the government all stand for differing point of views. However, in the subsequent essay I will provide certain points why I disagree with the statement.
First and foremost, it is important to mention that students, who are not majoring in history or other fields that are somehow connected with it, will merely waste their time by learning something they do not really need for a successful career. In my opinion, concentrating on the vital things is much more beneficial. My friend’s experience is a compelling example of this. Currently, she is majoring at chemistry in the state university, which is considered to be one of the best educational institutes in the country. Despite the fact that she attends the science school, she was required to attend the history course. Even though this might sound well, my friend end up spending much more time on the remembering by heart historical events and dates, instead of gaining more profound understanding of her main subjects. As a result, her academic performance in the subject of chemistry lowered enormously, which is unacceptable for a science student.
In addition, modern educational system enables students to choose additional academic courses, which are not associated with their majoring program. This is an amusing opportunity for those, who have a broad scale of interests. Therefore, there is no need to cause more stress to others, who are not interested in history. For instance, my mum who is a history professor also confirmed that this system would be much more effective and even pleasant. According to her, even though she does her job great among those who chose liberal arts, most of the science students are seriously bored during her classes, as they did not apply for higher education in order to receive this kind of information.
However, it is worth mentioning that history is a vital subject for any well-educated and broad-minded individual. That is why it is decisive to do well in it in the secondary school.
In conclusion, even though I personally love this subject, that opens up to me more and more in various ways, I realize that not everyone is ready to spend their time and effort on it. This is specifically applicable for students majoring in science, who should mostly concentrate in their field and practice in laboratories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ints why I disagree with the statement. First and foremost, it is important to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10218978102 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93432674415 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54501216545 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.643797437 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.368421053 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148362317467 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444029754281 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461907407845 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846124434107 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323254635439 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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