Are you agree or disagree with the statement, Only people who earn a lot of money are successful
What is mean by success? To achieve dreams, target or goals means success, everyone has successful in his life, everyone has their dreams , their targets, their goals, and when they achieve it, he/she become a successful person in his life. Money and success both are different terms, when you successful in your life you can earn money automatically, but it’s not mean that you have a lot of money then you are successful in your life. Without money also you can get success in your life.
Now a day we can think that money is everything in your life, hence we just follow the money other than success, but there are many examples who can successful in his life without money many freedom fighters, sport persons are successful in his life. Mahatma Gandhi is one of them, who is successful in his life because of only his thinking and the passion of about his goal, he is sacrifice his life for the nation, now everyone take his name with respect.
In sport, Sachin Tendulkar is one of the best example of person who is successful in his life without money, he is successful because of only his talent and passion about his game. Now a day he is god of cricket sport. One time he doesn’t have enough money for his cricket coaching, but now he is one of the richest person in India. That means for successful life doesn’t required money, but when you are successful in your life you can earn a lot of money.
I disagree with the statement of only people who can earn a lot of money are successful, without money also people are get success in his life by using their talent, hard work, passion about their goals or targets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56418918919 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3898135088 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412162162162 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6619713498 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.818181818 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34128043053 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166239171015 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129580038972 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266756802858 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10611319262 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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