Some people like to travel with companion other people prefer travel alone
Everyone loves for travel, traveling is one of the favorite hobby of many people's, they are travel one place to another place for their enjoyment. Most people are travel with group or with companion, every person has their own choice they can travel with group or alone. I think traveling alone is better than traveling with group or with companion, the five advantages of traveling alone as discuss follow.
Firstly, when you travel alone you can get your privet space, whatever you can think you can do it very easily, but in group traveling, it is necessary what the group leader decide. In group traveling the management is required very proper and full prove, such as, when I was in college, college are arrange trip for Kashmir, in that trip there are around 500 students are a plane for trip. When trip is started everything is ok, but we go on designation there are many problems we are faced. The reservation of hotel is cancelled due to late check in, we all are sleep in buses in whole night. The all student are frustrated, and all are frustrated on group leader. In that case the management are collapse and everyone get in problem. In other case when I was go next time in Goa alone, that time I reached at Goa in mid night and I can easily find out hotel for me.
Secondly, when you travel in group or in companion it is necessary that you follow all the rules that group leader tell us, but when you travel alone, you don’t have any group leader so your decision is the final decision, whatever you want to do you can do it. When you travel alone and you want to do some changes in your plane you can do it very easily, but when it is in group traveling it is not very easy and it required to ready all the group members are agreed for that change. As discuss above when we go for Kashmir trip, me and my some friends want to go for enjoying climate of Srinagar, but for our plan there are some student are not agreed that’s why the plan is cancelled and we are back to home.
Hence, I agree with the statement that traveling alone is better than traveling with companion. In alone traveling you can enjoy your freedom and you are the own boss.
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... your freedom and you are the own boss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4094292804 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27670975829 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424317617866 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7606850854 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8666666667 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283535277053 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12068461201 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136654455106 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238211987654 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155064820844 0.0645574589148 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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