do you agree or not about telephone is much important than television
In today's modern word, the technology is much developed, and before telephone invention the television is invented. Both telephone and television are the equipment of entertainment and knowledge, you can get information about current situation by news or other channels on television, and you can also get this information from searching on telephone. But in my point of view, telephone is much important than television. I feel this few reasons, which I am going to explain in following essay.
Firstly, you can carry telephone everywhere that you want, but you cannot carry television from home. Hence you can't get information that required you when you are out of home. For instance, I am very big fan of the Marathi serial name as Swarajta Rakshak Rhambhuraje, this serial comes on television at 8:30 PM but on that time I was stuck in traffic, and that time I just remind, the live link are available on my Facebook. So I just open it and watch full episode, this is one of side benefited for me on that time. We all know that telephone/smart phone carry everywhere.
Secondly, in fastest wold the communication is grow very fast. Television is the only way of entertainment and knowledge. But the telephone is also the way of communication. Your family member or your friends are out-of-town. You can call him and connected with them by telephone, and know about them like how they are? And where they are? You can also make video call to them to see them. In my case my high school study and my graduation in completed out of my town, hence the only way to talk with my family in telephone. We are always connected each other due to telephone.
Thirdly, telephone full fill your needs on the spot. Suppose you want a get information about history of Chatrapati Shivaji Maharaj, you can just search it out on telephone and find it out. But that information you can't get very easily on television. Also you want a watch particular movie you can just search it out and watch it, but for television you want a do wait for a long time that time. On smartphone you can watch that movie without advertise, in case of television there are advertise are available in between movies.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the telephone is much important than television. You can carry telephone everywhere, also connected with each other via. Communication. You can find out information very easily and also watch movie break free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79572446556 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84131781518 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44893111639 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3151426695 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6538461538 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1923076923 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11538461538 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356213725746 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100336904653 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101924389439 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218040681744 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840717830183 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.