How do movies or television influence peoples behavior, use reason and specific example. to support your answer
The television has several good and bad effects on people’s behavior. In following essay I will explain some major influences of television or movie on people’s behavior.
Firstly, people are tries to follow as they seen on television or in movies. Every movie reflects some conclusion and this conclusion is always spread good thought. But these thoughts are come from various types of bad thoughts; many people are follows this good thought as well as bad. The movies are depending on particular stories which are depending on crime base, various use of technology, ghost stories. Many people’s are trying to follow the crime story and tries to play a real character in real life and they do a serious crime in their life. But when we talk about entertainment then television or movies are the best way to entertain any person, he/she can spend lots of time without boring.
Second, as we see in our every day’s life there are many people’s are addicted television. In India may of house wife’s are addicted by family drama serials; they are spend their much time to watch various types of serials. They also try to follow the serial in present life and result of that is destroying many families. In my village women watch a particular serial in that the wife has an affair with another man. The women also make that type of affair, but after certain days the woman's husband got information about her affair and he gives divers to her. From that we can say that the addiction of television spoils people’s life. In other hand television provides latest updated knowledge and the current affair in the world.
Third, many people’s follows the style of movies hero, like their clothing style, their hair style also follows the walking and behavior style of hero. Many people are also tries to keep their body as like movies heroes. And the result of that they improves their style of living. I my case, I’m following my super hero Salman Khan (He is one of the famous film hero) tries to maintain my fitness and living style like him.
In conclusion, the television is the best way of entertainment also; it gives us updated knowledge, current affairs in the world as well as the information about the latest technology invented. In opposition it is cause of destroying many families, also people tries to follow crime story in movies and get spoil their life. It is also the waste of much time when people watch movies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, then, third, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88151658768 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58736196709 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469194312796 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1713926296 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153999556182 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576448769632 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579607612726 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115056386272 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773592032673 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.