Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of element should be taken into consideration to examine the advantages and disadvantages of travel in a group led by a tour guide. A consensus has yet to be reached. However, personally, I am of the opinion that travel in a group and hire a person as tour guide is the best way for experience a good travel. Three prominent reasons which can support the contention would be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, one of the convincing reasons in support of the thesis is that a tour leader has lots of experiments about what way can lead to the goal place directly and easily. He or she can estimates all of the necessary things which would be required during the travel. The leader of group is well-informed about spectacular landscapes, famous places and shopping centers, if there exists any. For example, In Tehran, there are the most beautiful sunset scene from top of the Milad tower, there are many economical and high quality shopping centers and restaurants, and also lots of excinting clubs, which transportation vehicles can be used for reach to every place of city. All of these mentioned points are well-known for a guide, but they are not identifiable for a unaccustomed tourist person.
Another reason which is equally important, if not more, is that it is more fun to travel in a group led than travel alone. Clearly, there are many people in group that they meet each others for several days, they maybe sing together, go to shopping, watch movies in cinemas, play pantomime or other team games together. For example, our teacher mentioned that she meet her husband at a travel group to Isfahan for the first time, seven years ago. Moreover, she and her husband have met a kind woman in their travel group, they have became friend with her, until now.
In addition to previous points, it is more economical travel if people travel with group led than they travel alone and with their own cars. Total amount of fuel consumption, costs of book hotels and restaurants, price of thickets for theaters and cinema and museums are significantly less for groups than for a person or a family.
To make long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, there are many reasons which can lead people to agree with this idea that travel in a group and hire a person as tour guide is the best way for experience a good travel. Some of these reasons mentioned above. But it was just a story in a nutshell. Obviously, there are many other examples and details, challenging the claim, which are not debated here.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good travel'.
Suggestion: good travel
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'estimate'
Suggestion: estimate
...lace directly and easily. He or she can estimates all of the necessary things which would...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tly and easily. He or she can estimates all of the necessary things which would be require...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'scenes'?
Suggestion: scenes
...an, there are the most beautiful sunset scene from top of the Milad tower, there are ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...uide, but they are not identifiable for a unaccustomed tourist person. Another r...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... woman in their travel group, they have became friend with her, until now. In additio...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good travel'.
Suggestion: good travel
...ur guide is the best way for experience a good travel. Some of these reasons mentioned above....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75333333333 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63584877514 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508888888889 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7390939193 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.578947368 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6842105263 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346960494845 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101153873261 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116261683595 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210540075469 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982054424697 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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