The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
As far as I am concerned, I strongly disagree with the statement. In the following discussion, I would like to address some evidence to substantiate my point of view.
First of all, traveling alone without guide allows you to do whatever you want and go wherever you prefer. Since everyone has a different feelings, some of your group members want to do something that you do not want to do. My traveling experience illustrates vividly that point. I had a chance to visit Portugal with my friend. My mother gave me so much money and I was very thankful for that. Then, I realized that I must buy some gifts for my mother. However, he did not want to go for a shopping since he did not have enough money that he barely managed his food budget. I could not buy anything because of him, and my my was so dissappointed.
Secondly, traveling without guide gives you a chance to save a lot of money. I am not independent in budget as a student which means money is a beag deal for me. My experience clearly shows the disadvantage of wasting money on tour guide. With the rapid growth of high technology, you can do everything by yourself all you need is smartphone. For example, you will never lost with the google map and you can know where you can eat, sleep, play, etc. There are plenty of reviews and information about every place.
Given the factors I outlined above, we may reach the conclusion that traveling in a grour led by a tour guide is not the best solution
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'feeling'?
Suggestion: feeling
... prefer. Since everyone has a different feelings, some of your group members want to do ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: my
...ld not buy anything because of him, and my my was so dissappointed. Secondly, trav...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47037037037 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61314866652 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0610327665 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138255395615 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445882118607 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838788575982 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114820906886 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130109441447 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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