choosing a job with more vacation time or one with high paying but less vacation time
Having a glimpse of the job situation around the world, we will be marveled at the variety of jobs for people to choose. Nowadays, with the ever-advanced development of the society, an increasing number of job opportunities emerges, and therefore, people are able to choose jobs that suit them most. In recent years, a controversial proposal was brought to public eyes, suggesting that a job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time. Some people consider it a unreasonable suggest. However, from my point of view, I cannot agree with it more.
To begin with, vacation plays an important role in the balance of life and work. To illustrate, life is very stressful in today’s world and relaxation is thus the key to survival today. Relaxing successfully also holds the key to a healthy mind and a healthy body. When our body is in a state of tension, it affects our inner organs. Our thought processes become fuzzy and our sight can become blurred. As a result, we are unable to carry out daily activities. Evidently, travel is wise choice when we decide to get ourselves out of the endless jobs. For instance, whenever I am tired of boring jobs, I will go to national parks, beaches or other famous sites. Later on, I feel refreshed to finish jobs effectively. Therefore, vacation is an integral part of my life. After all, every form of activities should be followed by an interval of rest, even the heart rests between beats.
Furthermore, more vacations means more time for family. Without a doubt, everyone in the world needs family around to live life to the fullest. Without family companying us, never would we feel happy when we share funny stories and tell jokes. In a sense, people can never do without their families. Thus, having more vacation time spent with family is indeed a blessing. For instance, my friend Mike works in a technical company, which offers him a high salary. However, he is always very busy with meeting and business, and thus he barely have time to stay with his wife and children. As a result, his wife get divorced with him in that his wife cannot stand the life without a husband listening to her issues and providing support.
Admittedly, including a high salary, many factors should be taken into consideration when we choose our future career. These factors are health insurance, chance of promotion, distance from home as well as working atmosphere. After all, a suitable job is crucial for everyone, which takes much of one’s life.
To conclude, the merits encompassed within a job with more vacation time outweighs those of a job with high salary but less vacation time. Concerning all the details mentioned above, there is every reason to believe that a job with more vacation is a wise choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 503, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... vacation time. Some people consider it a unreasonable suggest. However, from my ...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...eeting and business, and thus he barely have time to stay with his wife and children...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, for instance, i feel, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82952182952 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6288157156 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553014553015 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4096461998 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1034482759 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5862068966 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65517241379 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461589060194 0.236089414692 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107518150828 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163038289896 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284109712978 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199714054155 0.0645574589148 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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