consulting with others or making decision alone
Some important turning point in our life is happened when we make decision about some important topics by which all our efforts paid off or back fired. By seeing this, it is very vital for people to try their best to decide profitable. Some people always do their task solitary, even making decision in a crucial point of their life. But there are another group that get help from other people in order to find best decision. I, personally, subscribe one Persian quotation which said one hand has no sound – or, to put it another way, the people can use advices made by other people can decide in more guaranteed way. So, I prefer to consult with others people about my important life issues because of assurance of finding better way.
Firstly, human beings live in their restricted mind, following turn their way in some limited ways experienced by them. Without any shadow of doubt, consultation with other people lead to broaden our perspective and receive their useful point of view. One of the most significant result of this is that we learn how to view life differently and make decision by considering more dimension of the topic. Additionally, we cannot experience everything because of our limited time and also its probably bad permanent effects, for this reason use of others people's experiences benefit us. Besides, we can find our wrong thoughts by talking with others. All of these bring more opportunity to make the best decision for us. For instance, my brother always deal with his problems alone and don’t consult with us, this result some setback in his life. Oppositely, my sister always talk with us and use of our perspective, she is more success in her life.
Secondly, psychologically speaking, if we talk with some reliable people in our critical points of life we would be more peaceful. Due to the fact that humankinds intrinsically are in need of supporting in hard time, it is important to communicate with other people and consult with them to feel no loneliness. Sometimes, we have some tough time and we are in a dilemma, if we didn’t have any loyal friends to rely on them, we would be upset and become depressed. In this condition we will see the world awful that we are leaved alone there even by making good decision for our life. In fact, consulting with other people gift us having social life and getting closer to others people. Involving friends in our both happiness and sadness, cause tied relationship with them which give us more satisfied life. For example, I used to decide alone always because I couldn’t trust others. But, with passing time, I noticed that I don’t see world beautiful, and always hope to have some extrinsic supporter. Afterwards, I change my way and get close to other people by involving them in my crucial point both happy and sad time. This change make me more satisfied in my life.
In summary, consulting with others about our important decisions, will have many advantages because of its good mentally effects and receiving broaden points of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...nt of their life. But there are another group that get help from other people in orde...
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Line 3, column 1186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ange make me more satisfied in my life. In summary, consulting with others about...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2528.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84291187739 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60064932896 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490421455939 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 802.8 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1114214225 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.12 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.88 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.32 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311883242095 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993178633557 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724644433033 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217734504407 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477735601836 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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