Development in technology can led people to enjoy longer lives.
With the advancement of human society and technology, people are now living longer. Many factors contribute to this phenomenon, and three of the most important are: the improved quality of the food we consume; the advancement of technology in medical fields; and the fact that people are becoming more conscious of their health.
The quality of the food being consumed is the most important factor that explains why people are living longer. Today, a variety of healthy options are available; we no longer consider the cost but instead keep nutrition in mind. While preparing food, we pay attention to hygiene. For instance, we wash vegetables and fruits before cooking. Besides this, we also use RO water for cooking purposes. Moreover, with the development of robust transport systems, inland people can now enjoy fresh dairy products and tropical fruits. In addition to this, refrigeration helps to preserve food for a longer period of time, ensuring its freshness.
Second, the government is investing more money in medical establishments and research so that countrymen can have better access to medical services. Thanks to convenient medical services, illnesses can be detected at an earlier stage and treated. Also, many of the fatal diseases that were known to cause epidemics can be treated now, and vaccines and antidotes have been discovered to eradicate them. This has greatly prolonged people’s lives.
Last but not least, people today are more health and fitness savvy. Every day, we witness people exercising or playing outside. Joining gyms and maintaining body is trending currently. All of these help them build a stronger body, and naturally, they would have a stronger immune system.
Clearly, technological advancement and the development of society have resulted in the dramatic increase of average life expectancy. People now have better food and benefit from improved medical services. Most of us are more health conscious as we spend more time exercising and playing sports. All these things help us build stronger bodies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 599, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70136323245 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8508997002 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242073127583 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636963875151 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674130955157 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122844033124 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536697447745 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.