Do yo agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
children are the most effective individuals in the society; They can do anything in anytime when they influenced from someone or something. In this regard, there are always a dubious situation has existed, Some people believe that students are more influenced by theirs friends, while some others believe the opposite, they think that students are effected by their teacher more. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the later group who believe children are influenced by their teacher. In the following paragraphs I will shed light on reasons which elucidate my viewpoint.
To commence with, teachers are students' hero who know everything. In this order, not only do students obey their teachers orders, but also are influenced. For instance, when I was a child I did whatever my teacher told me, and when I was home I strove to mimic her behaviors and spoke the same as she did. Therefore, by this individual experience, I persist on my word that teacher get influence by their teacher.
Another reason which deserves discuss the same as the previous is that students are in their youth age and spend remarkable time with their teacher. When students go to school, neither have they time to devote it for hanging out with their friends, nor time to spend with their family even. They should just study and go to school. As a result, they spend a lot of time with their teachers and get influence as much as they can from them. Therefore, regarding what I said above, do you think it is possible for students to be effected by their friends?
With consideration to what I mentioned above students are influenced with their children because of the fact they dedicate a lot of time to them, and they are their hero as well. Additionally, take my advise for your children future, if you want to bring a brilliant future for your child, I will suggest you to pay attention to her/his teacher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
children are the most effective individuals in t...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to discuss'
Suggestion: to discuss
...eacher. Another reason which deserves discuss the same as the previous is that studen...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...eir hero as well. Additionally, take my advise for your children future, if you want t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75151515152 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58428001849 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512121212121 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5569366362 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350190177268 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133146133602 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744010443823 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227635435595 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447271133767 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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