Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Throughout history, people have need their friends in their daily life, as these kinds of relationships have crucial role in people's lives. In my opinion, making friend is not harder than keeping an old friend. In this order, I completely agree with the statement that it is indispensable to keep friends than make a new one. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in ensuing paragraphs, in detail.
First and foremost, old friends can give people pieces of advice that are based on their personality. Getting familiar with friend's personality takes a lot of time, let us say about decades. Therefore, when people have someone to know their personality, they can feel comfortable because they know that if they faced problems, they would have someone to give them consultant based on their personality. My own story is a compelling example of this point. When I was a child, about ten years old, I got familiar with a girl, named sarah. After a while, we were our best friends who know everything about each other. When I say we know everything about each other, I mean, we can decide in the shoes of each other without anxiety because we know each other desire toward various happenings. One time, my car broke down and I had to loose on of my important
work appointment, but suddenly one thought cross to my mind, and I sent sarah to the appointment. She knew how I acted and spoke, then she just put herself in my shoes and did in the best way in my absence, like I did it.
Another significant reason, which deserves attention, is that old friends are much reliable and people can share their secrets with them without being worried. Secrets are an inextricable part of human's life, which each of us have one of them. In my opinion, friends are the best people to hear our secrets, even better than parents, because there are some secrets that cannot be told to the family members. However, it is important that a person know who deserves to share his/her secret with. I mean, people cannot rely on other people simply, unless they are reliable. For instance, my brother had made a new friend about five years ago. My brother had a very bad habit, which rely on people easily, and share his secrets with them. He did it as well with his new friend, and after they broke up his ex-friend disclosed his secret with anyone who saw. Consequently, had he relied on his new friend easily, his secret would not be disclosed with strangers.
Taken all the above factors into consideration, keeping an old friend has more advantages than making a new one. Not only can old friends give us consultant based on our personality, but also they are reliable sources which we can rely on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 831, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ne time, my car broke down and I had to loose on of my important work appointment,...
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Line 5, column 855, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn and I had to loose on of my important work appointment, but suddenly one thoug...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Work
...nd I had to loose on of my important work appointment, but suddenly one thought c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, i mean, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65833333333 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49737275146 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48125 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8629179153 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211632560182 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769496233961 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960556523047 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13602449479 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964895031015 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.