Do you agree with the following statement? Do people benefit more from traveling in their own country than in a foreign country?
Nowadays, travelling has not become an excellent way to get away form the daily life for a leisure and relax, but also a good means to broaden one’s horizons. But a controversy that how to choose our destination of our trip has come into our sight. Some people hold the point of view that traveling in their own country will be conducive to them while others hold opposite ideas that it will be better to go abroad. As far as I’m concerned, they are equally advantageous to us.
On the one hand, traveling abroad can help us grasp a marvelous opportunity to further our understanding of foreign countries to a larger degree. When step onto another country, it will be easy for us to get an overall and comprehensive view of the real life of local citizens, and we can also build an intimate relationship with them. Only if you experience the same thing written in books or showed in the screen personally in reality, can you build your own perspective and not rely on second-hand information. For instance, before I traveled to Indian, the image of this country demonstrates that this country is poor, to some extent, and it can’t keep pace with the modernization of the whole world. The stories and pictures also exhibit that this country is stuffed with discrimination and prejudice of women. However, when I got connected with the masses there during the trip, I found that they are all friendly to foreigners like us, and the cuisine there is delicious as well. Women from every walk of life there is sparing no efforts to fighting for their own rights, which left impressive memory in my mind. Thus, on no account should we state that we are familiar with a country without immerse in there on our own.
On the other hand, the significance of traveling in our motherland also should be mentioned. Needless to say, speaking the same language, we can easily build relationship with the local and can push our communication to a deep degree. To illustrate, when traveling in Shandong province, based on the local culture that advocate the similar values and attitudes, there is no difficulty for you to interact with them and you can also accept their own unique culture. You can enjoy different attractions and foot there without considering behave improperly. And if you visit the well-known scenic spots such as Mountain Tai, it will easily touch you and a pride of your motherland will stem from this. On the contrary, without history background, it is conceivable that you can not get clear picture of the meaning under the surface of attractions in foreign country, and sometimes it will cost a lot time to behave like the masses there.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that traveling in a foreign country is no less important than taking a trip in your own country. Not only shouldn’t we give top priority to any one of them, and should we choose one of them for our destination concerning our own demands as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2473.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77413127413 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74736471007 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503861003861 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0302953577 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.65 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227087379353 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722982780026 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542939660655 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143753682015 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449669929393 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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