do you agree or disagree? always telling the truth is the most important consideration in nay relationship between people.
Recently, the communication has become very important for our society, to put it in another way people try to build up strong relationships with others. Some people hold the view that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationships, however there is a solid body of evidence that casts doubt in these beliefs. Other people claim that there are other behaviors more important than telling the truth such as kindness and respect. From a personal perspective, the former point carries more weight given that telling the truth always makes relationships deeper, less stressful and more confidence. Below I will strive my supporting points in more details.
The foremost point, provided that people tell the truth in relationships, they could build up strong relationship. For example, relationship between two partners should be built on the trust, to that end they can live in peace without any arguments. Moreover, their kids can live in a healthy environment which is very important to their mental well-being. Therefore, telling the truth is very significant for family stability.
Next, coupled with deep relationship, less stress is another reason why telling the truth is very important. Provided that people say lie, they adapt to say more and more lie to cover the first one. That behavior stress them out, not only because they have to remember their lie; but also they are worried to be uncovered. After passing time, they could get accustomed to telling lie. As Steve Jobs, the chief of Apple company said that lie bring another lies with itself, therefore he has a main rule in his company that employees should tell the truth under any circumstances.
One final point, although the previous reasons are the first ones which across the mind with a glance, they are not the only reasons available, there is another subtle point must be born in mind. Telling the truth makes people more confident and respected in the society, in another word they could build confidence friendship. The noteworthy refreshing intelligible statistics, revealed by a recent survey conducted by Oxford University found that people who tell lie loss the societies’ respect and have few friend and they get some mental diseases such as depression. Consequently, telling the truth has a positive impact on people’s personality.
Taking everything into a consideration, with a doubt telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. It is suggested that parents teach their children about the importance of being honest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24213075061 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87129706972 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535108958838 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8391236613 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.65 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219735577892 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797454716326 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698298407786 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149602575628 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705267643954 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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