Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"Education is not preparation for life；education is life itself." Some people may think that students should not need to take history classes, while others consider that history is related to everyone. Hence, in my opinion, history courses do require students to take.
First of all, students can comprehend the current issue effortlessly through learning the background of history. Since the present events are subsequence with the previous. By contrast, if they don't learn the history of the world, they may fail to connect the series of events from past to now. Moreover, they are unable to know the roots and heritage of their own ancient country as well. Therefore, it is through the history courses that students tend to get acquainted with the issue currently.
In addition, students can augment their abilities to clear up problems by learning from history. It is history that specific records the mistakes made by ancients for people nowadays as the reference. Take the Asian parents for example, they usually avoid their child experience the familiar event from their unfavorable memory via giving a warning. By knowing the points of the problem, juveniles are able to extract fertilizer from the experience and turn into their knowledge, which further progresses their capabilities immensely in dealing with problems.
Lastly, students can obtain enormous mental abundance from learning history. Since the considerable effort made from ancients who was through the tough works. Accordingly, offsprings tend to understand the meaning and comprehend in the different aspects of the event sincerely. Moreover, they are possible to learn to live peacefully with others via more appreciation and respect. Hence, students are able to gain mental balance swiftly by absorbing the optimistic essence from the ancient.
Definitely, some people may think that people should pay more concentration on advanced(progressing the)development but rather be obstinate in the past. History has already happened and unchangeable while the future is ongoing and full of hopes(expectations)(opportunities) that could be succeeded. Nevertheless, if there is no history, there is no future. Through the ability to deal with problems and the abundancy of mind essence, students can gain immense development for the needs of the future. Consequently, I still think that students do require to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50264550265 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20379436168 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8599732619 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0476190476 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241863992037 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753985397837 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878975946826 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13894131329 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773449180814 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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