Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising.
Nowadays, with the prevailing trend of social media and manifold kinds of information channels, more and more companies prefer to spend money on their advertisement, and some of them even believe this is the only way leading to success. However, as far as I am concerned, I hardly concur with this idea, and what I believe can be substantiated as follows.
Admittedly, advertising plays a key role in making profits. With the high-speed development of technology, the masses are paying more and more attention to social media platforms as well as traditional advertising channels such as TV and newspapers. Whenever people want to search for information about the products that meet their preferences, they are capable of putting the keywords of the products they need into a search engine or social media platforms, and the information about the products will appear on the screen within a second, which is convenient as well as time-saving. Provided the companies make some propaganda videos about their products and put them on those channels, they can appeal to more customers as soon as possible owing to the convenience brought by diversified advertising channels.
However, it is also vulnerable for companies to guarantee the quality of their products if they want to gain profits in a long term. Although advertisements can attract a large number of customers in a short time, the only way to turn them into loyal ones is to ensure product quality. Imagine that an influencer introduces a product. At first, customers may be appealed by his words or the eye-catching effects of the advertisement. But after receiving the products, if they find that the quality is below the average, they will no longer believe in those advertisements and even boycott all of the products produced by that company. Take me as an example. Once I watched an advertisement about a pen. I really fell in love with it at the first glance, and the words the host said in that Ad made me pleased. Nevertheless, after receiving the real product, I was disappointed and even cast doubt on other products manufactured by that company.
In addition, the organization and management are also of vital importance to the company. If the company is equipped with some advanced organizational system and management skills, it will obtain more attainments than other rivals since, in modern society, human resources can facilitate the development of a company. A good example of this point is the story of Li Ning, a company with expertise in sports equipment. At first, although the company made a lot of advertisements on TV and on the Internet, they still could not gain enough profits since the efficiency of the production was relatively low owing to the outdated management methods. After the revolution in this field, the company adopted a more cutting-edge management system. Now, every employee is allocated to different groups, but they also can exchange to other departments and groups with ease so as to improve some procedures of the production. These changes stimulate employees' participation and productivity.
In a nutshell, other factors, such as product quality and management, that affect a company should also be taken into consideration. Only in this way, can a company ensure its development and keep profitable in a long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...rm. Although advertisements can attract a large number of customers in a short time, the only way...
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Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n those advertisements and even boycott all of the products produced by that company. Take...
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Line 5, column 659, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...by that company. Take me as an example. Once I watched an advertisement about a pen....
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Line 7, column 865, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... other departments and groups with ease so as to improve some procedures of the producti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, so, still, well, as to, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2791.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11172161172 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05603684341 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489010989011 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 878.4 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5373578035 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.291666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101308574866 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291492160419 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250113207752 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614110574621 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307355689546 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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