Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Opinions diverge on whether life currently is less happy and satisfied due to the rapid change. Although some fervently advocate this sentiment, I am at loggerheads owing to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, education can be more relax than in the past which makes kids happier. This can be explained by the fact that education has not just have one way of teaching. People can learn through many formats such as online, self-study or homeschooling; especially online study which just occurred after the development of the internet. This means that kids will have a variety of options to obtain knowledge to be comfortable for them. Besides that education nowadays can be acquired through games as well which not only bring students awareness but also happiness; compared to the past kids only had normal boring lessons without any images or videos to help them imaginated the information.
Furthermore, the world has occurred many new types of entertainment over many years. Thanks to the development of society, there are more types of entertainment than in the past such as watching movies or playing video games. This implies that people can try and experience these new set of enjoyment. Besides that, technology breakthrough which deliver modern devices that can help people release stress such as nitendo switch or ps5. While playing on these decives, people can connect with more online friends and have fun coversation which can be an excellent method to gain happiness.
Last but not least, people can obtain high positions in a society easier compared to the past. In the past, only kids who was born with a silver spoon in their mouth can get good carreers but currently, life is fair everyone can study equally so that people who are ambitious can be employed in to famous companies and receive handsome salary. This means that people can be satisfied because they have adequte money to live in a high standard life and take care to their relatives graciously.
All things considered, life nowadays is happier and more satisfied compared to the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6389500406 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.377011457 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143028716854 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506128786716 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377406659693 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815935689155 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400615130348 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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