Do you agree or disagree with the following the statement?
Being creative rather than planning carefully, helps people come up with the best solution a problem.
What is the best way to solve a problem, being creative or planning carefully? This is a debate question. In my opinion, I think that being creative is better than planning carefully with the following reasons.
First of all, people prefer to solve problems immediately to minimize the damages and being creative can help to solve problems more quickly. It is because that being creative means that people can figure out the solution to fix up the difficulties in a short period. For example, when a company faces with the crisis of losing consumer, creative managers always can minimize the damages because they can come up with the solution at the first time. In contrast, making a solid plan always need a lot of time, but at the same time, the company may continue to lose their consumer and undergo an extensive damage. Therefore, being creative can immediately solve the problem in this case.
Secondly, the innovation solution sometimes is the best way to solve problems and being creative is to create a new way that no one finds out before. Take me for example. Last year, the shop which I worked for overproduces toys owing to a mistake. At this moment, a talented employ suggested that we can do an on sale online instead of original advertising such as television commercials. By the virus marketing through the social media, we can explore new customers, and our shop can go through this crisis. On the other hand, if our shop still handles the problem with only planning carefully but no other new way, we might get a great loss because of lack of buyers.
Admittedly, the best solution often needs to be planned well which is to make sure the solution is perfect enough. However, the flexible is the most important factor to solving problems. To be more specific, we should have more than one solutions to solving difficulties in the case of undetectable situations. And being creative can address emergency affairs such as traffic accidents or delay in shipment better than impractical carefully plan. It is because that no matter how well- structured your solution is, there is still some affairs that you cannot foresee. As a result, being creative will deal with the problems better than planning carefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 593, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'extensive damage'.
Suggestion: extensive damage
...inue to lose their consumer and undergo an extensive damage. Therefore, being creative can immediat...
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Line 10, column 35, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
... Secondly, the innovation solution sometimes is the best way to solve problems and bein...
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Line 10, column 671, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a great loss because of lack of buyers. Admittedly, the best solution often need...
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Line 13, column 234, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one solution', 'a solution', or simply 'solutions'?
Suggestion: one solution; a solution; solutions
...more specific, we should have more than one solutions to solving difficulties in the case of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, i think, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91578947368 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60351350073 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2097145217 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.95 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351830270371 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108003897197 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969218681543 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230705048943 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746783477449 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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