Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
What kinds of traveling styles do you prefer? Some people like to travel with a group of people and is accompanied by a guide who knows everything about the tourist attractions. While some people enjoy exploring the world on their own. In my opinion, I am in line with the idea that traveling alone is the best way to have fun since it allows you to control your trip, explore the world alone, and have a better chance to meet local friends. (There are several reasons why traveling alone is the best way to travel around, such as)
At the very beginning, people travel to stress out the disappointment that life has to offer.
Under these circumstances, people would like to care only about themselves. In contrast, when traveling as a group, the guide would have to take every guest’s demand into consideration. Although one is on vacation, one still has to stick to the guide’s schedule, which makes the trip not relaxing at all. That is why being able to control one’s trip makes the traveling experience much better.
In addition, adventuring alone makes everything more exciting. I cannot deny that traveling alone is sometimes difficult. However, the difficulty makes the trip more memorable. And those memory is priceless. A great example in point is that my cousin took a trip to Europe alone last year. He got his wallet stolen in London. However, he can sit in the London police car and being offered tea by the local officer and the officer even offer to show him around the city. That is, you can always expect something special to happen when adventuring the world alone.
Last but not least, it is always a great experience to make friends with local people during the trip. Traveling alone provides people more opportunities to connect with others because you have to use local language to order food, reserve a hotel, or even ask for directions. In the case mention above, my cousin is still in contact with the London police officer. They are now good friends, and always send postcards to each other. Accordingly, traveling alone is a good chance to meet new friends around the world.
All in all, traveling alone is the best way to visit any place. It enables people to control their trip route, enjoy the excitement of figuring out the world, and makes local friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erything about the tourist attractions. While some people enjoy exploring the world o...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this memory' or 'those memories'?
Suggestion: this memory; those memories
...ulty makes the trip more memorable. And those memory is priceless. A great example in point ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, so, still, while, as to, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77694235589 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50905108375 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4550869602 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180056194557 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482215882376 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527605743156 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916311611629 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702025302596 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.