Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friends are one of the most important parts of our lives that make our daily life more interesting. Some people say the ability to maintaining a small group of friends is making them happier than the ability to connect with different people. However, I beg to differ since being able to open up to new things or expanding one’s social life is always highly associated to be a happy person. There are several reasons why I think the ability to make new friends at no difficulty is more important for happiness.
At the very beginning, to make new friends easily, you have to be an open-minded person to accept the difference between everyone. Being an open-minded person, it is less likely to be tackled down by the frustration in life since they are always optimistic. My open minded cousin is a great example in point, he is so good at making friends. Once his robot design got turned down by the contest’s referee. He was not sad at all. Besides, he is grateful for the referee for pointing out the flaws of his design. That is, the characteristic of being open-minded can get you not only a bunch of friends but also a happier life.
Secondly, to make many new friends, you have to possess the courage to try new things, and try new things always make one’s life more interesting. I used to be a person who thinks stinky tofu is not a delicious dish because I never got the braveness to try food that I am not familiar to. I changed my mind until I step out of my comfort zone and give it a shot. It is so delicious that I believe whenever I eat stinky tofu, my life is happier. For this reason, I believe life is brighter when you got the ability to try new things which also allows you to make new friends.
All in all, though the ability to maintain an old connection between your acquaintance is also important to make your life delightful, I believe the ability to make new friends, such as being an open-minded person or eager to try new things can raise the level of your happiness.
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- TPO 48 Integrated Writing Task 80
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily Use specific reasons and ex 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...point, he is so good at making friends. Once his robot design got turned down by the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46195652174 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5685543881 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491847826087 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8739442376 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233844808134 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802109573113 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896215827439 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16018157961 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871511209028 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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