Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
How do you get news from your daily life? Do you get news source from different news company, or just rely on one of the news resources . As far as I am concerned, I believe people should collect information from multiple media, since people would like to avoid fake news, seeing the big picture of the events and read news about other countries.
As the very beginning, a different income of the news can help people from receiving biased information. That is, not all news company are doing their best job for being neutral. In this case, if you only count on one news source, you might get incorrect information. Local news company in Taiwan is a great point in case. Almost every news company is biased to the left party, that is you can barely see negative news about the left party. In contrast, other political parties are slandered on the media. That is why I thing multiple news sources are required to keep people away from biased news.
In addition, different news companies use different aspects to describe a the same event, and sometimes they only provide segment information that stops people from getting the whole picture of the event. Back in the days when the military accidentally fired a missile and killed a fisher. Different media provide different detail about the event. One news company emphasized that one fisherman was killed in this accident, while another provides the reason why the missile was fired unintended. We cannot truly know the whole event by only read one of the news from each company. Therefore, we need several news sources to organize the whole event.
Last but not least, local news companies usually only focus on news that happened in their region. Getting news from different resources allows one to absorb news around the world. For instance, International news is not available on the local news company, “Apple”, since it mostly provides local news that happened in Taiwan. In this case, if you take information from other news resources, such as the BBC, you can get easy access to the global news you are looking for. Accordingly, I believe several news resources can give you a better sight of what is happening in the world.
All in all, to be well-informed, people should get information from different news resources. It is because multiple resources can keep you away from fake news, allow you to see the whole picture of the event, and provide you access to global news.
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- TPO 48 Integrated Writing Task 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r just rely on one of the news resources . As far as I am concerned, I believe peo...
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Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...e slandered on the media. That is why I thing multiple news sources are required to k...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...anies use different aspects to describe a the same event, and sometimes they only pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84725536993 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46960663185 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458233890215 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.557276027 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3043478261 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2173913043 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47826086957 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278038418481 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105707020929 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075197903408 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202799570188 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548876797767 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.