Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The competition between friends always has negative effect.
Without a shadow of doubt, a sense of competition plays a key role in every individual’s life. An interesting question which arises regarding this issue is what are the effects of the competition between friends in their friendship and in personal life of each of them. Some people believe that it has always negative consequences, but there are others who disagree with them. There are strong grounds for believing that the competition between friends sometimes has positive effects, and the following paragraphs will aptly elucidate them.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that friends who compete with each other will try more for win, and it helps them to achieve success. For instance, when friends have competition on their school’s scores, they will study more to get a better score. As a result, they become hard-worker persons, and they will fight for prosperity in every stages of their life. My individual experience during the school time is an informative example for this. I always had a passion to get the best score in the class, so I devoted a lot of time to study. I did not satisfy with a good score, for I wanted to be the best. As a result, I become a hard-worker person who always fights for his goals and never gives up. This lifestyle leads me to achieve success in my studies and in my job. Without that competition, I never have this prosperity.
The second noteworthy reason is that in a firm friendship, friends are not jealous about each other’s win, and they help each other during the competition, so their friendship will be stablished. For lightening, I can mention my own friendship. When I was a high-school student, I had a friend who compete with me, but his score was fewer than mine. I remember I was going his home and helping him in math and physics after school, for he asked me. That meetings made our friendship strong, and now, after years he is my best friend.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to draw a conclusion that, not only does not the competition between friends have always negative effect, but also it has some benefits for each of them in their personal lives, and also it can stablish their friendship. It is universally acknowledged that people who is passionate about competition will be more successful in their career.
- TPO43 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, for instance, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8184079602 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81521271631 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502487562189 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7657222494 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.85 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18881013726 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585380613171 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612466176552 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140423716329 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870462807902 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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