Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The content of advertisement in a particular country can tell you a lot about that country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We cannot imagine modern word without advertisement. It is critically important for any company to promote its sales by using commercials and by adaptation products for any customers features. The content of advertisement is diverse for different countries, so I definitely think that advertisement allow us to find out a lot about a country.
First of all, commercials let us to understand a lot about economy of a country. Do its citizens wealthy or poor? So, if a country is poor most advertisement will be about inferior products. In contrast, if a country has high GDP per capita commercials will be about high quality and expensive products. For instance, in countries of Africa or South America far fewer advertisement of any products like premium auto or iPhones. Nevertheless, there are a lot of commercials about outdated and low quality gadgets like button phone.
Secondly, advertisement allow us to understood culture and religion of a country. So, in different countries people have different food in their ration and various clothes in their style. These habits based on culture experience and religion of people. For instance, there no advertisement about pig meat and bikini in any Islamic counties. Also, in counties of Indonesia, China and Japan are very specific eating habits, people in these counties eat insects, a lot of seafood and rice.
Finally, advertisement let us to know about beauty standards of a country. So, expectations about the appearance of man or woman are different from county to country. For instance, in counties of east Europe men should be masculine, so usually men are emotionless, bold and calm. In contrast, in Korea men tend to be more feminine, firstly it reflects on their appearance, they are thinner and weaker than in east Europe.
In conclusion, commercials allow us to know a lot of information about country, this is wealthy of a county, culture and religion and standards of beauty.
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- TOEFL iBT Test 2 integrated writing 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12893081761 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05771002576 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525157232704 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8766705694 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8421052632 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153098629051 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050303181727 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380832285027 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848106137642 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441056490883 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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