Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Eventually, all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The machine is becoming more intelligent and can be emotional. Some thought by famous scientist that artificially intelligent will reach the point where robots will be able to replace human to work out all our jobs. This essay will discuss why artificially intelligent robots can conduct all human occupation in the near future.
Undeniably, in the last years, machine learning, deep learning, and many other algorithms lead to increase the intelligence of robots. Computer science has developed so quickly in the last decade that it creates numerous math models to solve problems and to facilitate intelligence of robots. Artificial intelligent become so pervasive that it influenced work and life for most of us. For example, increasingly jobs are disappearing such as bank teller, train conductor, and some operator in factories. As we all know that computer technology improved intelligence of robots may be the reason why so many jobs disappear in the recent years. In the future, numerous data and math models will help robots be smarter to conduct all human job.
Nowadays, although some people still claim that artificial intelligence cannot have an emotional feeling such as compassion or sad. However, robots can have basic emotion aspect by elaborate algorithms. Computer science has published some theories like long short-term memory and convolution neural network to help machines to understand human emotion. Take my experience as an example. I learned Natural Language Processing in this semester and this course taught me how to use APIs such as Keras and Sklearn to train models to comprehend human language. In middle of the semester, my modle can estimate basic emotion for sentences accurately. For instance, it understands that ‘love you’ is a positive emotion and ‘hate you’ is a negative emotion. I believe that it won’t be a long time for many technology companies to create some fascinating robots can understand human emotion really well and these robots will be qualified to do jobs which require emotion.
This essay discussed that robots’ intelligence is increasing exponentially and robots also can develop emotional intelligence by technology. In my opinion, artificial intelligence robots will have the capacity to operate all of our occupations and take all of our jobs eventually.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43442622951 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99177333618 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527322404372 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2362291292 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.684210526 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214939430496 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706868621246 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605719125629 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154162574049 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439991838442 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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