Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Athletics is as important as arts are for any given country. If I had to agree or disagree with the statement, I would disagree with the statement. I feel this way for 2 reasons, which I will illustrate in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, a variety of people live in a particular country with different interests, some people have an interest in sports while some people have an interest in arts. If we spend more money on arts then we are doing injustice to the athletes of our nation and those who aspire to be athletes. This will discourage aspiring athletes. For example, my 10-year-old nephew, who wants to become a swimmer and win an Olympic gold medal for India will be heartbroken when he sees that the government is valuing arts more than sports.
Secondly, when an athlete or a national team wins a medal at an international sporting event, it brings a lot of honour to the country and encourages the youth of the country. Apart from economic development, we are also judged on how well we perform in sports since events like the Olympics and Commonwealth are organized to uplift the sports culture of a country. For example, when Neeraj Chopra won a gold medal in shooting for India at the Olympics, which was the first gold medal in track and field for India for a very long time, hence this achievement was recognized by the whole world.
Lastly, if the government decides to spend more money on arts than on sports, it will set a bad image for the youth of the country. They will think that pursuing sports is not important and would focus on other areas of studies. For instance, in India, subjects like Science and Mathematics are given much more importance than compared to sports or other extra-curricular activities, as a result, most people in India end up pursuing engineering and other STEM fields. This is why even after being a country of 1.2 billion people, India has poor records in the sporting events such as the Olympics and FIFA.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the amount allocated for the support of athletics should not be reduced. This is because it will demotivate our current and aspiring athletes and set a wrong perspective of sports for the youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68204426581 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511688311688 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0964222901 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158362698442 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060301072429 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642546261473 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985580919707 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426143382508 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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