Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
some people think the arts are quit important in humans life, so the government should spent more money on it. However, other people think supporting althetics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams is more important. From my point of view, I agree with former.
First and foremost, arts play a very important role in people's life. Though appreciateing the arts, people can relax from it, because the arts is kind of things that can make people feel calm and relief. The government should care about how their citizens feel about the society. The citizens is a big parts of the society. If the dwellers get some entertainments which can make them live happily, people can have good mood everyday. it's worthwhile to spend money on those field. Nothing is more important than happiness. For the inhabitants they can go to the art museum while they tired, so they can take their mind off the pressure. making citizens happy is the principle of the government.
Furthermore, arts can make the local economic like attract more tourers. Eiffel towers in Paris is a good example. this construction mean romantic, which attract tourer from all around world in order to see how wonderful of this towers. people travel with their family members or their consort. According to the reasearch, the economy in French had increase rapidly at that time. When the local society have a lot of people to travel, the job can be created, which help the government to solve those unemployments. Eventually the government can get more profits than they spend.
Admittedly, those athletics also should spend some money on it, because they are the symbol of our society. But they are not as important as the arts. so the government should spend more money on arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93220338983 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58160464876 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0126524574 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1363636364 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4090909091 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183449070471 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576878777744 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672536102922 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138863679761 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792538487497 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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