Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The internet has had a positive impact on humanity.
Being in the 21st century is living in the digital world. The human race hasn't seen the use of technology at this rate before, which has eventually made the internet an important part of our life. I believe the internet has a more negative impact on humanity than being positive. I have several reasons for this which I will explore ahead.
First of all, we all have been virtually active than being active in reality. For instance, today children are connected to their parents on all social media platforms but hardly meet them in person even though they live in the same house. There are plenty of surveys found that suggest that people being a virtual environment lack many social skills and they tend to avoid any social gatherings. This kind of behavior only makes children more and more self-centered and they lack the sense of family bonding. They become more comfortable in their virtual space than in the real one. But in life to some extent only we can be virtual as being social animals we require human touch or presence to survive. This feeling increases the sense of humanity within us. There will be no empathy between human beings as they have only known a person distantly. People won't be able to understand what other person is going through and rather than helping we might ignore them.
Additionally, the internet can be considered as a boon as we can do anything and everything online it may be ordering food to pay bills. But all this has lead to a society where humans are lacking their original social behavior which in turn may be an alarming factor for rising mental health issues. Everyone on the internet supports by posting images or twitting about any unfortunate incident, only a few people help the person being affected in the incident. During old times, people used to stay in joint families in India. Which in a way used to be beneficial for young children in the house as they used to naturally inculcate some of the important values and virtues one of them was empathy from their elder siblings or grandparents. Today these families stay far from each other and making it difficult for children to imbibe such values as their parents are busy working, all these children have is television to watch or the internet to explore. This might sound beneficial at first but these children play violent games over the internet and lose the sense of humanity in many ways that can be counted. This makes them violent in real life too, rather than helping a needy person they tend to ignore them as they think it isn't their responsibility to help someone in need. If these children were able to spend time with the elderly they might have learned one to two values instead of from them.
In conclusion, the internet is need for an hour but the use of it impacting our society in different ways leading us to a society where empathy doesn't prevail. The use of the internet in adequate amounts can lead us to a better future but excessive use of it is making us less and less human more of the machine. Eventually, it will lead to the generation of people who lack humanity which is the base of the human race.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2585.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 558.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63261648746 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3743301445 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464157706093 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 832.5 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6395267285 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.32 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966894507532 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034155871207 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402656691816 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07916963533 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350660545719 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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