In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The choice of giving importance to imagination than to knowledge in professional field is trivial one. In fact, it is expected from people working in any field to have creative thinking to excel in their profession, which might sound fair but does impede people who are knowledgeable from shining in their academics or profession. The prompt recommends that people should emphasize more on their imagination than on gaining knowledge. In my opinion, I disagree with this suggestion and suggest that people should be more knowledgeable than being imaginative.
To begin with, nothing was discovered in this world based on just imagination. Solid backing knowledge is required to develop things and to excel in one's profession/academics. For instance, Steve Jobs can be fancied as imaginative person but his huge contribution to digital world depicts his brilliance and knowledge . If he was assumed to be only imaginative it won't be possible for him or for his company to provide the world with iPhone. This depicts that giving utmost importance only to imagination and no giving any attention to gaining knowledge would lead a person to devastating career.
Further, if everyone in their profession started believing imagination to be at the core of their profession/academics would do less good than harm. For instance, if teacher in school isn't knowledgeable but does have good imagination wouldn't be capable of teaching students fundamental math or science required. Consequently, it will lead in whole generation of students who are less knowledgeable and they more relying on imagination ignoring the possibilities of such behavior. Above example illustrates, relying completely on ingenuity and ignoring need of knowledge would lead an individual to more unstable profession. Furthermore, one might lose self-confidence as part and parcel of providing more value to imagination instead of knowledge. In near future we might have many creative ideas but no prudent person to implement them in reality.
Imagination is mother of invention is quite true in most of the cases. But it these inventions weren't arrantly dependent on imagination they were possible because of relentless research which came through knowledge that the inventor possessed. So giving imagination more importance than knowledge in profession/academics would be most appropriate choice by any individual.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oice of giving importance to imagination than to knowledge in professional field ...
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...rivial one. In fact, it is expected from people working in any field to have cre...
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...ne. In fact, it is expected from people working in any field to have creative th...
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...isagree with this suggestion and suggest that people should be more knowledgeable...
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...uired to develop things and to excel in ones profession/academics. For instance, Ste...
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...rld depicts his brilliance and knowledge . If he was assumed to be only imaginativ...
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...tmost importance only to imagination and no giving any attention to gaining knowl...
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...ing completely on ingenuity and ignoring need of knowledge would lead an individu...
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... is mother of invention is quite true in most of the cases. But it these inventio...
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Suggestion: weren't
...t of the cases. But it these inventions werent arrantly dependent on imagination they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49863760218 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35874401963 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534059945504 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4242032334 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226467676828 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778959581548 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442427176108 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150021188018 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342335432168 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oice of giving importance to imagination than to knowledge in professional field ...
^^
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rivial one. In fact, it is expected from people working in any field to have cre...
^^
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne. In fact, it is expected from people working in any field to have creative th...
^^
Line 1, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isagree with this suggestion and suggest that people should be more knowledgeable...
^^
Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...uired to develop things and to excel in ones profession/academics. For instance, Ste...
^^^^
Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rld depicts his brilliance and knowledge . If he was assumed to be only imaginativ...
^^
Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tmost importance only to imagination and no giving any attention to gaining knowl...
^^
Line 2, column 579, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gaining knowledge would lead a person to devastating career. Further, if everyo...
^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...arm. For instance, if teacher in school isnt knowledgeable but does have good imagi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... For instance, if teacher in school isnt knowledgeable but does have good imagina...
^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...edgeable but does have good imagination wouldnt be capable of teaching students fundame...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing completely on ingenuity and ignoring need of knowledge would lead an individu...
^^
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is mother of invention is quite true in most of the cases. But it these inventio...
^^
Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...t of the cases. But it these inventions werent arrantly dependent on imagination they ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49863760218 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35874401963 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534059945504 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4242032334 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226467676828 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778959581548 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442427176108 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150021188018 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342335432168 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.