Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The Internet should be like other services (such as roads), and government should provide it to the public at no cost.
I speculate the government should open internet service to the public. Because in this century internet and social media are momentous to people. Actually, the individuals’ life will be stopped somehow. Accordingly, publicity of the internet is a really accurate decision. Moreover, It can improve life quality and help students to improve their knowledge; Furthermore, It can help our older generation to adapt themselves to young generations. I will explore my viewpoint in the following essay.
Firstly, In this circumstance, the quality of life in different cities and areas will increase. The publicity of the internet can help to decrease the traffic and, as a consequence, it will give us clear air. For instance, when people access the internet in every location, they will be able to do their works from home or in their office, thus they don’t need to go to the bank or perhaps, they can order their goods. Therefore they don’t need to go out that much and it will help the quality of the city and, besides this, it can open some job spots for delivery people or other careers.
Secondly, If we ideate about specific groups, with the internet and social media, students can improve their knowledge. To illustrate more, they can utilize the internet to search the articles and different books and magazines online whenever and anywhere they want. For this generation, I mean young individuals, this index can change the students’ attitude and dare them to learn more and stimulate them to study about other titles despite their major courses.
thirdly, Nowadays we can see how much families are separate from each other and this is due to the different vision about technology. According to the prior statement, the internet can change the old generation’s vision and it can help them to get closer to their children and their young relatives. Thus, it can be beneficial for everyone.
In conclusion, I ideate that, the internet is an essential issue for living these days and the government should open access to it for everyone.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02346041056 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72169517644 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0462929419 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.764705882 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133735412959 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581808777772 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705302323352 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858137982725 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423945416233 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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