Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “It is better to be a follower than a leader” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
I suppose this idea that follower is better than a leader for three reasons, include leaders always need to have new skills and knowledge because they have to find problems out and then they can figure the solutions out,
another reason is that followers have a lower chance for a mistake and wrong way but leaders always blame why they can’t find the best way,
leaders need to organize and to manage groups who have different kinds of characters in different circumstances, therefore, they must think very quickly and wisely,
other reasons include responsible that leaders keep the follower under the control because
I believe that various factors have an impact on a leader’s management.
First of all, in my opinion, the most important character that leads to the following leaders is that leaders should improve and develop their skills in terms of organization, management, and unification which needs to raise their talents. Leaders have to raise their science of management even though they are certain in
For instance, since I studied in high school my teacher gave me responsible for a leader in class I have found the best way for management and organization in class.
Characters of leaders
For example, one of the most importantly responsible for leaders considers making decisions when all the members of the group meet problems, dangers, difficulties. Leaders will be able to devise problems with their knowledge and intelligent for solving problems. In this case, I have taken a strong dislike to one of the leaders who are not perceived as one of the best solutions for their followers these leaders usually are in poor taste. I always have liked to follow leaders who have exemplary manners which are difficult for me leading and not following.
It’s not fair to expect leaders or parents to do everything in the family.
Moreover,
Second,
For example, it has already been
Third, I believe that leaders play important roles in assign a label of groups
In conclusion, some of the most important things jump to the conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26392961877 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72056059222 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533724340176 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.309443542 48.9658058833 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.444444444 100.406767564 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8888888889 20.6045352989 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7777777778 5.45110844103 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182122433724 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863853111376 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529112921311 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786821328006 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559820303821 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 11.7677419355 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 10.002688172 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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