Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
Introduction, I support this idea that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. I believe that humans always want to develop and to ease their lifestyle then they have to figure the best way out because they want to do a comfortable and convenient life. In the case of transportation, I agree with the statement that today humans attempt to produce higher car than before and they use a lot of cars which is not in use last time. In this essay, I want to describe my idea into three reasons include transportation and facilitation with a car, energy and time-consuming these days, create science and technology.
First of all, one of the most important reason in the case of transportation is the issue of energy and time-consuming. The history of transportation started from humans decided to use for transported everything by animals such as horse, donkey and so on but they couldn’t carry heavy things and they weren’t fast and consuming energy a lot. As a result, human developed in from agriculture to industrialization. Therefore, cars replace animals. After that human invited bicycle for transportation that, it used in some countries. For instance, a car is necessary for women, who need to have a car because they are a situational shopper who spends a long time shopping because they don’t want to shop. Therefore, they should have a car because they don’t know how much time will spend in the shop. For example, ten years ago, I went into a car store for buying and I was in search of one modern car. I thought that it would make my transportation easier than walking. Eventually, I just bought on impulse, I couldn’t stop myself. I am not the kind of person who shops till they drop.
Second, on the one hand, create science and technology caused to expand a lot of cars in the world. On the other hand, these develop to cause making a lot of carbon dioxide gas and methane gas offered by cars and that causes pollution in the air and green gas. I’ve heard a lot of news about climate change in the world. I believed that produce automobiles in the industrialization era cause to pollute the planet earth and changing the weather. I’ve always been excited by the idea of robotic automobiles which will be imitated by humans from nature.
Third, in my opinion, humans produce cars and automobiles for spending time on one of the most important issues in the world such as saving time and energy but they don’t struggle to keep the environment and nature in the best condition. Although, time and energy are more important than other things in the world they have not to keep in their minds to protect the nature of the earth as well as pastime.
In conclusion, I think that changing agriculture to industrialization in the world cause a lot of advantage and disadvantage for human in terms of pollutions and deforestation and climate change. The modernization in the world causes to ease life and it’s not perfect but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As a result, I believe that increase automobiles and machines is inevitable because humans don’t have a long life and they must save their energy and time for research and improvement of technology and not the issue of transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
...rth and changing the weather. I've always been excited by the idea of robotic automobi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2728.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 565.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82831858407 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00699370147 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440707964602 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0184513521 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.12 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213425726445 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068954833614 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858654948927 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121765808662 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902192534023 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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