Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be above average at many things than be excellent at one thing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Which is the best choice: cunning at one skill or the ability to do many things at an average level? If I had to choose between two of these options, I would pick excellent and talent at one thing for several reasons, and I will develop my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, being above average at many things means several doors would be open to you. For instance, job opportunities, another income source, travel worldwide. Many companies, for example, require some skill at an average level. On the other hand, having one skill will always limit your chances in life. I have to admit that my own experience has profoundly influenced my opinion on this matter. After graduating, I learned the Japanese language, which was a hard skill to obtain. However, my hard work paid off; I got a job opportunity in a Japanese company specializing in the chemical industry. You can see that learning another skill might give you a huge opportunity in life. While limiting yourself to only one skill might do the opposite and reduce your chances.
Furthermore, having multiple skills would boost confidence. Successful people with many skills have high self-esteem, even if they do not master these skills. Confidence is a crucial feature of success in life. Conversely, being skillful in only one thing might make the individual less confident and always feel the necessity to excel in another skill. Drawing from my experience, I was not skillful in the Matlab program at the university and only focused on my study.
On the other hand, many of my colleagues were good programmers and had average knowledge of the Matlab program. As a result, I always felt shame and a lack of confidence when anyone asked me about the Matlab program. And I still think the same. I always refuse to answer or work on anything related to this program.
In light of the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that people should always try to gain as much as possible of skills and talents in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82028985507 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62278642128 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4898366822 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1904761905 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249897559666 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710893685336 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982955688677 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13382753794 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978690399688 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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