Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, almost all of the societies have a noticeable trend of increasing at the postgraduate level. In my opinion, at present, countries make an effort to create many experts in one specific subject. I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, by advancing technology and ascending is at the level of education, people gain the ability to learn many skills and knowledge by using the internet and other ways such as different classes. The level of knowledge and awareness of people is increasing, therefore, they make need expert trainers. For instance, I prefer to learn a new sport with a professional coach rather than a person that has not enough experience. My own experience demonstrates this reality, last year, I experienced awful damage in my leg in the gym, as my previous coach was not professional.
On the other hand, companies and other businesses face much competition with each other. Hence, they prefer to employ specialist people for reducing the problems. For example, my brother was employed in a big company last year because he is a techie and an expert programmer. The company needed a specialist person who can reinforce the efficiency of the company. His boss believes that an expert employee with many experiences and much information will ramp up the output of the company. This example demonstrates how important it is to have enough knowledge and experience in one specific subject.
In summaries, in my opinion, we need the specialist man powers who are too expert in their field. Their expertise causes the development of societies and they can reduce the flawed of beginner employees. In simple terms, we will need many professional man powers to make a developing world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
Nowadays, almost all of the societies have a noticeable trend of in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0102739726 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89597878003 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2834196301 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4375 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152283312629 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050622604878 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727654546834 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092878871576 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554506375837 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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