to reduce stress olone

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to reduce stress olone

The topic of spend time alone or with others to reduce stress and relaxation has always been controversial. Unlike many people, some people spend their time to reduce stress alone. I think the advantages of relaxation personally will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, according to the psychological perspective, people can make a good situation for relaxation when they are solo. This condition reinforces their mind's ability to solve the problems and other things that are challenged their mind. After the failure at the marriage, for instance. Many people prefer to be alone after divorce. It is not only a natural reaction; it is a nice method as well.

In addition, interesting activities and entertainments are useful ways to reduce stress. Therefore, people can do their favorite activities personally; such as walking, swimming, study, and others. My own experience demonstrates this reality. Last year I could not pass my exam in college, I was too sad. I decided to relax, hence, I went to the countryside and I gained my self-confidence. I walked for hours and thought about my mistakes, I found an excellent way to solve my problem as well.

Finally, many people cannot enough ability to overcome their stress with other people. They should be alone. Undoubtedly, it is a very useful way for them, in particular nervous people. They make decisions better alone. Clearly, they cannot control their stress with many people's criticism.

To summarize, often people, without a doubt, spend their time alone to reach better results. This is very important that people can manage their negative emotions in whatever ways, while everyone has an especially way, but I think people can do it very well alone. Based on the above information, alone is an acceptable method to conquer their stress.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('especially') instead an adjective, or a noun ('way') instead of another adjective.
...ns in whatever ways, while everyone has an especially way, but I think people can do it very well...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in particular, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13141025641 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83595532178 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4409016259 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6086956522 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5652173913 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129848741432 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439932846728 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822658866875 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802614739363 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667394526874 0.0645574589148 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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